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Joe struggles to get along with his dad as he finds himself irresistibly drawn to his young cousin Hannah. How far will he go?
It's been almost a year and a half since I first posted my story here. In the meantime, I got back to writing, but went all the way back to the beginning.
The main story and plot haven't changed, but I've added subplots, took out lot of 'telling' in favor of 'showing' - in general, what I believe is much better writing and a more enjoyable read.
All the vote counts were reset so I can get a fresh appraisal from the readers.
The first three chapters are complete and I'll be releasing them about every ten days. The editing for chapter four is nearly done, and then I'll continuing the rewriting of the later chapters.
The story is outlined to the end, and many scenes have been written. I will try hard to get the work out and completed in a timely manner.
Thank you.
I have posted all of the existing text for this story, which covers five chapters here.
The series was previously posted at another site which decided to get very strict about it's 16+ and then 18+ age limits, which drove several other writers away as well. The previously posted Part 4 was long and broken into Chapters 4 and 5 here.
There is more to come, but it might take several weeks. I already have some of Chapter 6 and some of the Finale written. I'm not sure yet if there will be other chapters before the finale - I felt the same way after Chapter 3 then wrote 18k words! It's heavily based on a true story, and I have it all outlined to the end, so it's a matter of how many scenes I can recall which are important to the story arc, and how many words it takes to tell that story.
I hope you enjoy, and I appreciate feed back, both good and bad.
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