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And the story goes on

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Let me apologize for being remiss on my updates. I will do better now. I also bow to the suggestions a few hundred of you made and our hero listens to those girls. The Alpha/Beta stuff stops with Chapter 12 also.

Thanks so much for waiting, I hope to make the story something you like.

Writing again

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I am sorry for not writing for a bit. Health and personal things took priority

This and other Pens will start back up.

Thanks to all the readers

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I tried to drive Just Another Day... two direction with an Alpha Chapter and a Bravo version(ch 8).


So far, by a 2:1 ration the Alpha chapter 7, seems to be downloaded more. Over 10,000 of you seem to be satisfied with Ray, since the story began, to me that means a lot. 2 readers cannot understand how a man could not want to go back to those girls though, guess that girls never shot at them or tried to kill them.
Still have some scars from that time, so just don't see things one way.

I'll write chs 9 and 10 also as an Alpha and Bravo version then probably just centre on whichever you like the most using chapter download count as the measure.

Again many thanks readers and remember, it is only a story, and in Real Life, everything does not always have a happy ending.

Tried to use a 7-a and 7-B

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Chapter 7-B became ch 8, the Bravo version where Ray does go back.

I made the mistake of not making a different Bravo version repeating Chs 1-6.

Let me restate, that ch 7 is the Alpha and ch 8 is the Beta currently.

Story continues in Baby It's Cold Outside

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I also wanted to thank my editors.

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