First of all, many thanks for all the feedback, which I really appreciate. Every suggestion and criticism is welcome, and I will try to keep an open mind and follow your valued advice as best I can.
Some questions keep coming back, so I decided to post a little FAQ.
Q: Don't you think these two have strange relationship?
A: That might be so, but if they were a normal couple just like anybody's mom and dad, would you still be reading this stuff?
In any case the relationship between Max and Karen is built on mutual trust - and that is something you very rarely find. Apart from that, they simply fuck the hell out of each other, which is definitely more than mom and dad do on a regular basis. Fantasy wins over reality any time.
Q: Does this story contain any personal experience?
A: Oh yeah, Karen is inspired by a real person. When I met her in real life, we clashed like two gladiators. Back then, she really was somebody's wife, and that somebody really tried to kill me.
But a lot of water has passed under the bridge since then....
Q: Some of the scenes do not seem a bit unreal!
A: Although you maybe technically right, I think a little glitch here and there doesn't really hurt the story - that is, as long as it continues to interesting and fun to read. After all it is a work of fiction.
On the other hand, you will also find major technical mistakes in the works of many bestselling authors .... but of course that doesn't justify my own errors!
Q: Your writing is not very good!
A: I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but I'm not a native english speaker. I try my best and correct each chapter several times, but there's a limit to what I can do.
Also: where I live, it's impossible to come by a good dictionary. Send me suggestions on style, grammar, the lot. I'll try and better myself and through that my writing (hopefully)
Q: What are your sexual preferences?
A: I am not a romantic person. I want sex to be very physical, even rough. The ground rule, though, is that nobody gets hurt. Sex should be like riding a roller coaster without safety belts.
Some exhibitionism gives great kicks and I got to know several women, who were heavily into public sex. So that's probably my favorite - until I find a new kick.....
Q: Will you add more chapters to the story soon?
A: So you do like this stuff after all!
Unfortunately progress is slow and I also have a regular job - if I were a fulltime writer you could find my works at the book shop. But I'll keep posting, please have a little patience.
regards
The Hitman