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I inadvertently left out a rather important section in chapter 16 - where a new character is introduced. Just corrected that - I hope!
Must get serious-er about the next book! This one is almost done. Now have to write around the traps I left for myself in this one.
Too fast? Too slow? More or less detail? Just wondering what you're liking or disliking about it so far. It's hard to guess at it, and it does travel some stranger paths in the next few chapters.
Book 2 is in progress, but largely depends on reaction to this one.
thanks!
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