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One of the things that happens as one is educated to write, is whether to right in first person or third person. Well I was listening to a lecture from Malcolm Gladwell, who was saying that he rarely writes in first person. and a gave an example of a storyteller telling a story, will do so in third person, as in "he said" or "She looks". You only use first person when you are writing about yourself as in a biography.
This caused me to rethink how I write. I feel that I am a storyteller, and I will be revising all my stories Starting with Bob's Life.
In this regards I have posted an update to Esmeralda. I will also be changing all measurements to the metric systems as this is the measurement system for Space.
Released a new story in bob's life series. It is called Susie. This one is a multi-chapter one, as will most of the future bob's life stories will be. I am also including the year the story took place as reference for the women in Bob's Life
I have also added a chapter to Carol, introducing Marie.
Add the beginning story to Bob's Adventures. It is not very long and Bob did a lot of stupid stuff due to youth. Bob is only 19.
Chelsea was updated to remove references to the first person as the story should be read in the third person.
Thank you sam21. Hopefully he will edit all my stuff.
As a result Chelsea as been updated, with better dialog, a change in the tags, and minor edits
After getting the scores for Chelsea, I discovered an earlier version of it, one with dialog in it. I combined the two and I think it is a better story. It would be helpful to receive and comments you would like. I am trying to get my scores to be higher. For me this is a learning experience. Please be brutal with your comments, but be honest, and constructive.
I am now writing full time on several projects, in hopes of getting published instead of self published.
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