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Released a new story in bob's life series. It is called Susie. This one is a multi-chapter one, as will most of the future bob's life stories will be. I am also including the year the story took place as reference for the women in Bob's Life
I have also added a chapter to Carol, introducing Marie.
Add the beginning story to Bob's Adventures. It is not very long and Bob did a lot of stupid stuff due to youth. Bob is only 19.
Chelsea was updated to remove references to the first person as the story should be read in the third person.
Thank you sam21. Hopefully he will edit all my stuff.
As a result Chelsea as been updated, with better dialog, a change in the tags, and minor edits
After getting the scores for Chelsea, I discovered an earlier version of it, one with dialog in it. I combined the two and I think it is a better story. It would be helpful to receive and comments you would like. I am trying to get my scores to be higher. For me this is a learning experience. Please be brutal with your comments, but be honest, and constructive.
I am now writing full time on several projects, in hopes of getting published instead of self published.
Just posted a new story, the first one in a long time. It has been a long dry spell for me as I stopped because I was working, then became medically retired and then became a full time author, as of three months ago. I am now writing every day, of many different genre and for a lot larger audience, and I hope to publish book, a full novel within the next year. In the meantime, I will be writing more, with each one getting bigger as I get to the ones that I spent more time with. There will also be fictional ones. The one I am working now is a coming of age one about a girl I went to high school, with, and turned her into my submissive slave for me and my sister. A complete fantasy about submissive women.
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