Dilbert Jazz: Blog

Found a new editor, look at Anita and see if it is a better story.
I am currently working on upgrading Carol, and writing additional chapters to finish the book.
My plans is to publish Carol.

My wife passed on January the eighth. I have been in a slump ever sense, as you can imagine. I am just now getting back to editing a few the stories that were written, but never edited.
I will be releasing them as soon as my editor can get them back to me. There are four new chapters for Carol, Marion has 2 new chapters, but needs a lot of work, no good deed has 8 new chapters, and the Walmart sniper has one new chapter.
These are the chapters I have written, but all these works in progress will be full length novels and I plan on publishing them. I have not got back into writing yet but maybe when I complete editing the chapters I have written, I will continue with these books that I have in progress.
I can finish them up and then I will start writing some new stories.

I have updated Anita and Mary Ann. The stories were converted to 3rd person, and using the metric system. I also have an editor who knows his stuff, and the stories are more readable.

Along with changing all my stories to third person, as a story teller would tell the story, I am greeting them redited and will repost them, as they become available. I am also posting a host of new stories as I get them edited.
Speaking of new stories I have started a new story, and have posted the first chapter.
Enjoy...

One of the things that happens as one is educated to write, is whether to right in first person or third person. Well I was listening to a lecture from Malcolm Gladwell, who was saying that he rarely writes in first person. and a gave an example of a storyteller telling a story, will do so in third person, as in "he said" or "She looks". You only use first person when you are writing about yourself as in a biography.

This caused me to rethink how I write. I feel that I am a storyteller, and I will be revising all my stories Starting with Bob's Life.

In this regards I have posted an update to Esmeralda. I will also be changing all measurements to the metric systems as this is the measurement system for Space.