Dark Apostle: Blog

Not a bad story idea, but holy shit it needs editing. I tried to send constructive criticism but the email is turned off. Dbuck if you see this, excellent story, it just needs to be polished bruv.

EDIT: Had some information about him, that's a shame that people on this site can be so fucking nasty. Pity, the guys got talent and with a little bit of polishing it could be an amazing piece of work.

Keep at Dbuck, the only way you get better is with practice. Not all of us on here are cunts.

I did a short story of James as a police officer a long while back, there was a copper on here who helped me out with a story and I wondered if he's still around, would he be interested in helping me polish it up?

Dying in your thirties or forties? "Tragic."
Fifties? "Such a shame."
Sixties? "Too soon."
Seventies? "A good run."
Eighties? "A life well lived."
Nineties?

"Hell of a ride."

Okay, so no more twitterings :P

This is an update, Carpe Diem is on the go, my editor is back so I can get cracking on that.

And I'm learning about things, stuff that's making my head hurt, and that NNPDAD is trying to teach me and making his head hurt lol. I'm always willing to learn! In case you're wondering, I'm researching complex prepositions and double prepositions. This is shit I should've learned in school if I were paying attention.

Still, very interesting reading and hopefully it'll improve my writing skills.

Who knows, stranger things have happened.

Just sayin'