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Andy has an accident and needs rescuing. He wasn't expecting it to be by someone he knew!
Just received feedback saying my natives were not realistically human. There's a good reason for that. They are not earth humans. They exist on a similar planet in an alternate universe. They are not going to act, look, eat, talk, age, smell, crap or anything else exactly like earth humans. They are 'genetically compatable' with earth humans, not exact copies of us.
Don't jump to conclusions about the entire race based on meeting a rape gang and his intended victim, who just happens to have a very nasty way of getting even.
And keep guessing on what is in the stasis container. :-)
I got to reading over what I had written and decided it wasn't what I wanted. Rewrite is in progress. I will post as soon as it's ready.
Capt. Zapp
Edit:
Chapter 11 now meets with my satisfaction. Enjoy!
Andy is near the end of his time on earth, yet there is so much he wants to do. And he definitely doesn't want to leave his women behind.
This is the longest chapter so far.
Capt. Zapp
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