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Well I've submitted the first 12 chapters of Tara Ardchlár for posting. The revised edition is some 40 chapters in length. Why in bits? Cause when i combined chapters into a single document, some of the formatting was lost. Why? I am not certain. I discovered it after posting Ananu, and unfortunately it affects Anna. The formatting issue has to do with font style. The story uses a lot of italic font. I am not sure what I did, but when the chapters were combined into a single document some of the italic fonts changed to normal. This was only in the cases where the entire paragraph was italic. It appears that only Ananu and Tara Ardchlár are impacted by this. So now I am in the process of fixing it.
The new version of Tara Ardchlár has been submitted for posting. This completes the revisions to Sarah's Saga. In preparing the revisions, I noted several activities that could take place in a future volume. Whether that occurs or not, only time will tell.
Hope you enjoy the revised edition of the story.
Well the revisions are nearly complete to the Tara Aradchlár segment that is on the website. It has been split into 2 segments of a little over 300,000 words. The changes in the new versions are primarily to fix grammar errors which includes inserting the missing words. There are some small changes to the dialog.
The first segment of what was originally posted as Tara Ardchlár is titled 'Ananu' and covers the Órarduine's adventures after 'An Clochán' until they arrive over the planet Ananu.
The second segment titled 'Tara Ardchlár' begins with their arrival over Ananu and begin establishing a settlement on the planet.
So what happens now? First the version of 'Tara Ardchlar' now on the website will be withdrawn. The next step is to submit both 'Ananu' and 'Tara Ardchlár' to the website for posting. This will likely happen in the next several days.
The updated version of 'Ananu' is currently available on Bookapy. However, it will be several weeks before the new version of 'Tara Ardchlár' is available on Bookapy. It is essentially complete, so I expect it will be published before the end of June.
Thanks for you interest in this story.
Cheers
The posting today completes the revisions to An Clochán as published in 2014. The 2014 story has been split in to two stories. Dóchas which has been posted is the first part of the 2014 story. An Clochán which was posted today is the second part of the 2014 story. In making these changes, a significant amount of time was spent reviewing the stories for errors in grammar, punctuation, missing words, font style, and etc. In doing this, a few sentences were reworded to improve clarity. Well that was the intent. ;-) Undoubtedly some were missed.
In the near future, similar revisions to 2015 version of Tara Ardclár are planned. The first half has a working title of Ananu. The second half will retain its current name. The change in titles closely aligns with the story sequence.
At some point the all the stories will be offered on Bookapy. Currently Mistaken Identity and Comrie are offered on Bookapy.
BTW, I have a new story in progress. Suspect it will be awhile before it is posted.
Cheers
Comrie the second story in the Sarah's Saga series has been updated. It is also available on Bookapy.
As noted before An Clochán as currently posted will be split in to 2 stories. The first half will be named Dóchas and the second half An Clochán. These will become parts 3 and 4 of Sarah's Saga. Don't expect them to be ready until August some time.
What is currently posted as Tara Ardclár will be split in to 2 stories. Thus becoming parts 5 and 6 of Sarah's Saga. The name for the first half is undecided however the second half will be named Tara Ardclár. As to timing it will be a while.
Cheers
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