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I wrote my story Paradise to Prison story in a hurry and I was told as much more than once, so I finally had the story come to me demanding to someplace other than my mind. Well this is what came out to play. The new story is not that story simply re-hashed, but a similar story setup, with some of Teddy's good luck thrown in. It take place in 2018, not the 1970's. But child born and bred in the city, who has played at working on the farm as a child. I hope you like it, I did. This first chapter is longer than I normally post. I couldn't find a stopping point, I finally just stopped or I would still be typing away at it. Let me know if chapter is to put it to bed, or tell how Jeff fits into the simple life in Braddock, Texas. BUICK GS
There is a new chapter of The New Hood about to go to the crowd of three who edit my stories. I have stated before these Gentlemen do edit out flaws that you never see. As each man does his magic the story changes as I add to what is there, or change the story to read better. So in fact none of these men actually edit the same story. I have never claimed to ever be an Author before I put my imagination to work, here on SOL. What I truly am is a guy telling a story at a party, and everyone is listening to what it is that I am saying. If we were truly a party nobody would telling to stop because I said it wrong, as you would be too interested in the story. There have been very few perfect chapters ever written here on SOL I manage to read the story without to much fanfare if I run across a flaw, that' all I am asking, as I have no intention of stopping my stories. Return of the Mack has a few chapter to go as folks in DC will want to talk to Mack and Buck about their land purchases. So stay tuned in as those chapters are coming. And Teddy will continue if all my other stories stop. BUICK GS
I finally finished a Mack chapter, Mack and his crew have been slow going, as sex fever took a hold in their Wagon Train. They found some friendly faces for a change, and things were looking up, finally. Well everything has both good and bad as they look for some land to set up shop upon. I am already writing something already so I will be posting something soon, I hope. Any flaws are most likely mine because I wanted it read, or because I added a word here or there, work with me. Please don't forget to vote, and thanks again for reading my stories.
I just finished a new chapter that I finished to close to X-Mas so I added to it through New Year's so it is a longer chapter. As always I was the last one read read and edit it after my team looked at it. So the flaws are my fault. These words written they way there appear to be pronounced as you see them Bidness = business, govment = government, Graey Fox = Gray Fox, Tre'= Tres and is pronounced Tray these things were indeed caught by my team, but they understood that I wanted them this way. I hope everyone enjoys this chapter as much as I did. I hope a few votes happen because the story was liked flaws and all. Working on a new Mack should be ready soon.
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