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Visiting THE NEW HOOD again

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I finally wrote a new chapter. Please do what I did to write this chapter. I re-read the previous chapter to really enjoy this new chapter. BarneyR also had to re-read the previous chapter before he threw his magic onto my words. After Barney improved it I added a one here and there. As always the flaws you find are not intentional, or any fault of Barney. It is how I wrote it, as that is how I would have told it to you from my conversation. Grammar issues for those who were perfect students can tell I wasn't getting the same grade. I hope you can still somehow understand what the words are trying to say on the screen. Yes I am still writing so something else will be turning up soon. BUICK GS

BOTH NEW TEDDY AND THE RANCH

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I finally stopped reading other peoples new and old works, long enough to write again, myself. I pushed past my issues with both stories aside as I didn't like any of the ideas I saw on the screen. I am sorry that it took so long to bring something to SOL. I what to thank folks that sent notes asking for new material. It may not seem like I noticed your messages. You messages helped me more than you know. I hopefully have gotten comfortable with my hunting and pecking style of typing once again. Wish me luck. Word Nazis if it hurts your eyes please stop reading. I have seen flaws in every story that I have read on SOL if the story was was long enough. So of the most obvious flaws happen as we submit the stories to SO sometimes, as what you see might be a not exactly how we had written it. That is not the fault of us or SOL. It is a sometimes as simple as a program to program issue. Do as I do, read on and enjoy what you see. I may have issues writing a story but I can read real well and figure out what the Author meant without to much too trouble 90% of the time. I promised BarneyR that I would do more new Teddy but The Ranch turned up first. I will start on new Teddy next week followed by New Hood. That is my plan, anyway but like Iron Mike Tyson once said everybody has a plan until they get hit in the face. BUICK GS

READ NEW MACK

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I saw some errors and I added to the story also with new material that wasn't there before. No editor other than me sentence structure did not change if that was you upset. Just missing words and and the paragraphs. BUICK GS

NEW MACK FINALLY!

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I finally finished Mack's next time of interest. What you got was nowhere I start out as. It came out for the better though. I am sorry I am still guilty of enjoying other people's work entirely too much. I am trying to do better. I have started a a new Ranch chapter I hope finish it in sometime in the next month. That is the plan as we go right now. Two of my guys are having issues so editing is slower and as always the flaws that slip through are my fault. May God Bless everyone and I hope that you are enjoying the Holiday Season. BUICK GS

TEDDY 48

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I want to thank all those that sent me notes asking for new material. I wrote most of this chapter months ago. I couldn't end it the way that I would have like as I hate cliffhangers! I still did not get the ending that I wanted, as I just left it alone. I added new headaches instead. I think these new wrinkles along with the other troubles when new school year begins will help me write a decent chapter. BUICK GS Two of my editors are down. BarneyR did a great job as usual. I added a word here and there and changed a few other words. So any flaws that we did not catch are my fault as I was the last one to read it before submission. I am not sure which other stories will be next but I will begin one of them soon. As I am guilty of reading other people great works like the Paradise series that I finally stumbled upon. I am not even halfway thru the 19 story series that is a truly complete page page turner. BUICK GS

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