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I TOLD YA AND I TOLD YA

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Chapter 32 will be in the Q soon. as I said yesterday expect next weeks post to be later in the week as I won't shorten the length of chapters just to post on time. I like the chapter. But I am telling you the one chapter for this week is only dealing with the parts of one of those locked down chapters that has turned into this whole chapter. The locked down chapter is better overall. As it has other dramas with-in the chapter. It has different three parts all woven together. The plots of each drama will be similar. So no loss as to the direction, just the streets to the same house have changed a little bit. Next week we move to another part. So Enjoy BUICK GS

AND YOU THOUGHT I WASN'T POSTING TODAY

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I have this weeks posting it ran a little longer than my normal chapter. Not much longer though. As trying to keep up with to different stories at the sametime plus deliver chapters about the same length as before. I am saying this because the days they are ready will most like move around. But my wish to keep them both up and running. Now fow this week Hood installment. Alex was just trying to go home. But as always somebody had to show out. Making Alex in turn put on a floor show. Tune in to see if Alex can help this camp. And if Alex solved the problems in the camp, before the problems solved him. Chapter Five headed for the Q. BUICK GS

DAY LATE BUT NO DOLLAR SHORT THOUGH

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Was intending to post yesterday, but had real life get in the way. finished proofreading for the third time. I had to fix a few a few huge errors cutting and pasting. Between writing from memory, and knowing where the story was headed may not match up 100%. With the flow of before. The is a touch longer, I will blog when all of the plots are back into the story. It's readable so enjoy it. I don't need to hear if you feel it ain't an A+ paper. I only need to know if the chapter came out as one long text again, or a flaw that large. Length of sentence, use of comma, keep that to yourself please. Will post with-in the hour. Thanks BUICK GS

MISTAKES!

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Ifound 8 or 9 small flaws none close to each other. I left a letter out of a name. I some ended up with would instead of wood. Most likely from moving text around because I am aware of the different uses of both words. left a few words that should been there, a set of quotation marks at the front of dialog. I point this out because yes I seen after the fact. Please email me as I hate to re-post. And being since the story can be understood I won't at this time. Any other flaw I would rather not know as the message of the story is there to see. BUICK GS

I WAS JUST SHOWING OFF

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Alex takes the ladies to his cave, and finds out women are still women no matter when they were born. After a hot night, our guy was just showing off, and ended up in a new little drama. Remember people are just people in the end. I believe all the Kazoo's have been removed, still no editor. I am sure it is readable. I have tried to cut down on the comma's. Though my sentence structure may not be the best, it is long way from the worst. All I ask is you enjoy what you see. BUICK GS

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