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This week Alex can't seem to stay in his on camp. While out helping friends and family come natural to him. hopefully he won't get hurt helping out. I will be posting chapter 7 in a few minutes. Then begin writing this weeks TEDDY'S WORLD. I hope you enjoy this chapter. BUICK GS
I said chapter 33 was ready yesterday and it was. But every time I proofread I always see something to add to make it better. Well I added a lot of new material to the chapter as I went it just flowed I couldn't stop it. And none of this was planned. And we are still covering those for those four lost chapters. I don't know how much longer the chapter became but it should longer than my normal chapters. As I took very little out while adding more. 50% or more of the conversation at the deposition was added this evening. I really made an effort to make sure you know who said what by limiting the conversations to only a one on one chats most of time. I hope it works for everyone as well as it did for me. That is best I can tell you. My new MOTTO is if it is so bad please stop reading it. So that it won't continue hurt you eyes, and, or minds. But I don't need the negative comments as I have Authors I want to read plus get my own stuff out as I am running 2 stories week. I will be submitting chapter 33 momentarily. BUICK GS
It will come online in the morning. In defense to the editor it did had a few issues I wouldn't edited it either. Working on TEDDY'S WORLD next it is done, just needs proofreading.
The editor who I will not name because I have read more tha a few stories he worked on. Looked it over said it was a good outline but the story in fact needs a lot of work. To edit the story he would have to totally rewrite it. What I will do is what I should have done in the first place post my story and go on. I tried to work with an Editors more than once to please the critics. Well after being insulted asking me if English is my native language, I no longer care. If what I post is to hard to read please stop hurting yourselves, trying to read my posts. My feelings will not be hurt on the matter. I will post both stories between now and in the morning. To may god bless you, and have a nice day.
But in all fairness I only finished the latest NEW HOOD Sunday morning. So I am giving the latest update. I am nearly done with the next TEDDY'S WORLD I should finish it by morning. but the editor still has to do his magic so I am not sure when it will be ready. Sorry about the delay but many of you demanded an editor. BUICK GS
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