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battered lamp

naveenreddypadala5999

I liked battered lamp vary much.please rocomand me some other stories like it.note that i don't really like a devils pact as much as the battered lamp although the plot is good. I don't know what is wrong .please help me

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richardshagrin
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You need an editor, or at least a proof-reader. Or moral guidance if you don't know what is wrong.

ian181

@naveenreddypadala5999

This is a link to ..a previous forum post.http://storiesonline.net/d/s4/t2543/lost-story#po45504 lots of good suggestions in there.

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