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Barely Sofia

Hi, My name's Sofi, a new author here, I've just started a new history and I do really need some help.

Please, check the story and if it fits your tastes, and you have time and tons of patience, contact me.

Thanks in advance;

Sofi

Replies:   richardshagrin
richardshagrin
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@Barely Sofia


Please, check the story


That Country

BDSM

After some economic problems, the Connor family has to move to another country. A country with different laws, and structure, for some reasons, the older daughter finds herself owned by her younger brother. Sex is expected, but the story will go slow, brother and sister are not blood-related, but they'd been family for a long time.

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Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, School, Brother, Sister, BDSM, MaleDom

Sex Contents: Minimal Sex

Posted: ‎7‎/‎26‎/‎2017‎ ‎1‎:‎18‎:‎33‎ ‎PM in progress

Non editorial comment added: With that lead in, "minimal sex" is a surprise.

Replies:   Barely Sofia
Barely Sofia
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@richardshagrin


Right now there's minimal sex, and it's going to stay like this for some chapters, sorry, I'm new into the tags and the sex content categorization,

My original plan was to change and add the right tags with each chapter, is ok doing that?

I would appreciate any help.

I'm trying to do things better day after day.

robberhands
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@Barely Sofia


My original plan was to change and add the right tags with each chapter, is ok doing that?


Yes and no. Technically yes, but you risk the ire of readers who'll start reading your story, trusting in its initially tags, and who might become upset about new content they did not wish to read about (i.e. squicks the tags are supposed to warn them of). I'd only do that, if the full list of tags would prematurely give away the plot of the story. You should at least include a warning in your story synopsis, that the tags will change as the story progresses.

Replies:   Ross at Play
Ross at Play

@robberhands

you risk the ire of readers who'll start reading your story

Yes, Sofi. Warn readers NOW of what is to come, as best you can.

Ernest Bywater

@Barely Sofia


My original plan was to change and add the right tags with each chapter, is ok doing that?


If a tag is appropriate to the chapter being posted, once you apply the tag you have to leave it there because the tags apply to the whole story. While Lazeez will only act if there's something in the story (as posted) that should be tagged and isn't, or is against the posting rules, you can add tags as the story progresses. However, people who later hit a tag or story content they don't like and wasn't tagged at the start will get angry and stop reading while also giving a low score for being deceived into wasting their time. This is because people read the tags, along with the synopsis to not read a story with something they don't like, they never go back to check the tags as the new chapters arrive. Better to give all the tags at the start, but it's your choice to do so or not - just be aware of the dangers.

sofieta.teta

I've updated the tags and added the ones I'm sure I will need in a next future, even when there's going to be sex, I'm not planning to add so much, I'm trying to focus on feeling and changes more than on the action itself.

Still looking for someone to help me with proof reading and editing, so, if any of you is interested, please, let me know.

Hugs;

Sofi

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