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Lateral Thinking Superheroine

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

Seeing the dire state of Earth and the abysmal quality of its leadership, the powers-that-be decide the world needs superheroes. The powers-that-be build a 'supercomputer' that, literally once in a blue moon, picks a random human and endows them with a single, randomly chosen superpower that can only be activated in times of crisis.

An unassuming young woman named Jane Everyone gets chosen and, due to an uninitialised computer variable, gets endowed with every one of the possible superpowers.

Whenever Jane Everyone, the superheroine, encounters a crisis, one of her superpowers is activated at random. She has to think outside the box to tackle each crisis without knowing beforehand which superpower will be available to her.

AJ

SaiDiaS ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Few problems with the idea. If she gets every possible powers it'll cause contradictions in the story. As well as, making the story boring. Maybe make it so that she gets every possible powers of specific types.

Also, change her name from Jane Everyone to Jane Evers, Or Jane Chance.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@SaiDiaS

Also, change her name from Jane Everyone

That was supposed to be the contents of the uninitiated computer variable, coming from her last name.

AJ

Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

DC did a comic along similar lines called Dial H for Hero

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dial_H_for_Hero

LupusDei ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

More often than not the random power will be next to useless. And that's fun.

However I would agree that it might be potentially easier to handle if she got a limited list of potential powers.

Every possible power, there's no limit to possibilities. Maybe she can use every exactly once? Or the list being endless, it's never clear if there could be repeat uses. And there could be very close variations that seems like repeated uses but aren't.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@LupusDei

Every possible power, there's no limit to possibilities.

I'm not a great fan of the superhero genre - there has to be a good story as well to like a contribution. But it seems to me that there isn't a large set of convincing superpowers, hence some authors rank them in tiers.

That would fit well with your and saidias's suggestion of a limited set.

AJ

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

An unassuming young woman named Jane Everyone gets chosen and, due to an uninitialised computer variable, gets endowed with every one of the possible superpowers.

There is always the concern about "balance" in a story involving super powers. And a writer should always be careful so as their character is not so strong that they are basically gods (unless that is your intent).

In fact, it is those flaws that has probably allowed Marvel to dominate DC in most things the last several decades. DC generally wrote in favor of god0like characters that could do damned near anything they want. Marvel on the other hand tended to go with "regular people", that had relatively few powers.

All Spider-Man has is strength, reactions, can stick to walls, and a higher than normal healing factor. That's it, but he has a big negative at the start as he is still a kid and can't even drive yet. All Daredevil has is reflexes and a kind of super-sonar. But on a big downside, he is blind. Punisher has no powers at all, just a driving need for vengeance.

I think that makes for more interesting stories, as it gives them something they have to overcome themselves. And that is something that DC only recently seemed to realize again, so their media spin-offs only in the last few years are finally worth watching (where as Marvel has dominated there for decades).

In my own "Superhero Story", I gave each of them some good powers, but there are also some negatives in there to balance them out. Two of the obvious being that the main character when not using her powers is blind. Then one who changes forms, and her "hero" form is almost invulnerable and stronger, but that is apparently it. And because of the difference in forms that causes unique problems (as well as her suffering from a form of PTSD). And another the guy is super strong and can heal from most wounds, but looks like a Bigfoot monster so can never blend in.

I find those are often some of the most interesting things to write about. Not just overcoming the "bad guys", but some of the negatives that come with their powers.

richardshagrin ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

If the main character was heroic but female, wouldn't she be a heroine? Or if very addictive, maybe heroin.

Replies:   akarge
akarge ๐Ÿšซ

@richardshagrin

I know you wrote that comment for its humor. But a heroine and a female hero are NOT the same thing.

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