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Charro6 ๐Ÿšซ

I seem to remember this question I asked a couple of months ago, but I can no longer find the story.

Teenage boy, father is a homebuilder. Mother is a dance teacher. Mother, dies, and father and son go on a road trip where the son uses things he learned at his mothers dance studio to flirt with women. I believe he finally hooks up with another teenage girl. His father gets reacquainted with an old romance.

Replies:   The Outsider  red61544
The Outsider ๐Ÿšซ

@Charro6

Rooftop Herald's "The Dance," on FineStories.

https://finestories.com/a/rooftop-herald

https://finestories.com/s/11091/the-dance

Replies:   Charro6
Charro6 ๐Ÿšซ

@The Outsider

That's the one

Thanks

red61544 ๐Ÿšซ

@Charro6

At your suggestion, I reread "The Dance" and thoroughly enjoyed it again. But it triggered another story in my mind. The two are similar, but the one that has me stumped is somewhat different. The father (no mother) loses his job and has to travel cross-country to interview for another one. He is rabidly pro-union and wouldn't think of working in a non-union shop. When he leaves, he asks his teenage son to prepare their house so they can sell it - minor carpentry repairs, some plumbing and electrical work. He insists on paying his son union wages so the kid makes a bundle during the summer. I also remember dad's friends stopping by to examine the boy's work and praising it to his father. Sadly, that's all I can remember. Anyone with a memory better than mine?

Replies:   upper
upper ๐Ÿšซ

@red61544

Sounds like Kinetic, by hammingbyrd7. It has the elements you described, but the main theme is about the son's superpower.

https://storiesonline.net/s/48605/kinetic

Replies:   red61544
red61544 ๐Ÿšซ

@upper

Sounds like Kinetic, by hammingbyrd7.

You got it in one! I forgot all about the esp part but I recognized the story in the first three sentences.

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