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Always Raining?

mrfriendly8181 ๐Ÿšซ

Really enjoy his stories and have to admit I'm saddened that his last story was 2019. https://storiesonline.net/a/Always_Raining

He and Jay Cantrell are the two authors that got me "hooked" on this site.

Unfortunate that both are now inactive. Unless anyone knows if either have different pen names or have migrated to different sites?

happytechguy15 ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

Thank you for posting! I had not seen Always on SOL, and did not think to search. I've read most of his stories on the other site that starts with an L. Read Smallholder twice. Also agree on Jay C.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@happytechguy15

Hmm, what would happen if Always Raining married Sunny Disposition?

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Hmm, what would happen if Always Raining married Sunny Disposition?

Ghastly Humidity

Replies:   Quasirandom
Quasirandom ๐Ÿšซ

@Switch Blayde

LMAO

whisperclaw ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

The name rang a bell so I followed the link and I confirmed that I'd read and enjoyed many of his stories. But, his last story, Find Me? Forgive me? ...it was not great IMO. After reading the whole thing I won't say I feel like I wasted my time, but I was sure disappointed. It relied on too much coincidence and lack of communication to drive the conflict. (I call this the Three's Company technique, after the sitcom that employed this in practically every episode.) Also, there was one glaringly obvious plot hole that the characters studiously ignored, which pulled me out of the story.

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