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Spiraling echoes

Quasirandom ๐Ÿšซ
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Well, this is interesting. Read Spirals and A Good Man close together, I'm willing to bet you'll get a heavy case of deja vu. I mean, not just that the main couples are really similar but several of the secondary characters as well, and the plot episodes match pretty closely beat-for-beat for, oh, two-thirds of the story, if not longer. (Final ending: very different, at least.)

FWIW, the later-posted story is better written. Both are decent coming-of-age romances of a nice guy in his last year of secondary education and the local heiress. They echo so hard, though.

helmut_meukel ๐Ÿšซ

@Quasirandom

What?

HM.

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Quasirandom ๐Ÿšซ
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@helmut_meukel

Whoops! A borked link swallowed up the rest of the post. Fixed. (That's what I get for posting too late.)

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Quasirandom

This is well known and has been discussed previously in the forum. I believe that the original author is comfortable with the situation, but I'm having a hard time tracking down the previous discussion to justify that belief.

AJ

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Quasirandom ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Gotcha. Wasn't finding a mention myself, but forum searching here is weaksauce.

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awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Quasirandom

Found it.

Quite a long thread and the 'resolution' is a long way down.

AJ

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Quasirandom ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Ah ha. Thankee.

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