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ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

I thought of this after reading a title of a story posted today.
A stuck-up 15 year old girl walks up to her dad and says "If you don't buy me that dress I will tell the school you sexually abuse me."

Dad looks at his daughter and asks "What kind of sex acts are you going to accuse me of doing to you?"

The girl looks confused and asks "Why would that matter?"

Dad has a evil smile and says "I don't want my Daughter to be called a liar."

Jefferson ๐Ÿšซ

It would definitely be a fun little story. And yes, pretty much anything can be a good story, it depends how it's told and where you plan to go with it.
Is dad going to rape her? Is she going to back out? What's she going to tell the school? Yes, it could be a good story.

Honey_Moon ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

It may sound wrong, but I would like it if the daughter was only bluffing, and ends up in way over her head. Maybe the mother hears and gets angry at the girl and takes the father's side?

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awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Honey_Moon

It would definitely be a fun little story.

Sadly the word 'little' is definitely the case - I can't see the concept expanding into a full-length novel. I hope the OP gives it a go, though - it sounds like fun.

AJ

Replies:   AmigaClone
Jupiter ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

Have u not read some of these stories?,and you're worried this might not be a good story.

RedCzar ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

I have seen something similar to this. (unfortunately I forget where.)
The daughter calls the cops on dad, accuses him of sexual abuse. Cops come. determine that it is all bullshit. Then the cops leave. Then dad confronts daughter in her room. (She's not going to call them again for the same thing...)

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elevated_subways ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

It definitely could work as a story. I'm 66, and in my day fifteen-year-old girls probably wouldn't pull stunts like that. But it's an entirely different world now - and probably not a better world either.

elevated_subways ๐Ÿšซ

@RedCzar

She seems to need a good spanking, but he probably wouldn't get away with that either. Then again, maybe he would get away with it. It would make for an interesting twist.

AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

Sadly the word 'little' is definitely the case - I can't see the concept expanding into a full-length novel. I hope the OP gives it a go, though - it sounds like fun.

AJ

I can. The first part would have the scene above and the father carrying through on this treat (possibly a little drunk). Second part would be the girl continuing a blackmail scheme (and possibly continuing the sex) until something happens that changes the how the girl sees certain things - including her relationship with her dad. Part three sees the start of a more conventional consensual daddy-daughter incest.

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