I’m sorry but I couldn't answer the email from Hanna as I deleted and lost Jo’s email address and couldn’t remember his message contact name on here. To answer you I’m afraid that as said previously the details in chapter 18 were fairly accurate. A lot of readers have said it didn’t spoil a good story and my intent, as stated from the start was to make the story ring true. Some readers say I did that, genital ‘Warts n’ all’. I’m sorry you and Jo disagreed, my motive was NOT scaremongering as you implied. It was a long story with an ending, some thought quite a good one. LD.