I got an idea for a story, and banged out the first chapter. It is in the queue now. Hope you enjoy.
I did some research and learned the correct format for a conversation. While writing this chapter I felt more confident, and it seems easier to read. I may need to rewrite the 5 chapters I wrote for ALM, but that is work and not fun.
My primary editor for ALM is slowing down due to real life interference. The other volunteers have yet to return anything I sent them, I am not sure about them yet. I could use some more help with ALM if anyone is interested.
I could also use an additional editor for my new story, someone familiar with grammar and such.
Thanks for the feedback!