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Minor story updates - typo problems mostly

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I updated a few words in 6 chapters. Most notably, Z's finance guy's explanation of fees. Someplace between non-paragraph line breaks in Word, my HTML maker script, and whatever SOL does, led to that list being badly formatted.

When Mitch was buying jacket and boots for Z, I made a silly homonym error. Unrelated to that error I had tried to use strikeout type (not allowed in SOL) near that error. While trying to demonstrate an SOL bug (there was no bug) I posted in the author's hangout my replacement text. I was teased about using the wrong word without anyone ever coming right out and saying which word was wrong.

More chapters are in the works. At 16 Fran joins Z in a job interview. With Fran almost 18, Z takes her to a client's home. Fran mostly behaves.

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