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Chapter 10

August 12, 2017
Posted at 4:55 pm
 

The next chapter is finally in the hopper. Sorry for the delay, but I had a scene in this chapter that I wasn't happy with. It was progressing the story too quickly and I ended up cutting it from the chapter. Don't worry, I'll keep it in my back pocket and try to resurrect it later.

Please let me know you thoughts. Is the story progressing too slowly, too quickly? Is there anything I can add to make it better?

As always, thank you for reading, and have good dreams!