So, it was brought to my attention by one of my readers, that some of the aspects of Mason's inner monologues were difficult to differentiate. I was unaware that I could even use Italics here on SOL, until he made mention of it. So I took a little bit of time, and went through "Unbroken", and made the corrections he suggested. I hope it makes the story a little easier to follow. And now that I know how to do it, I will continue to do so with any future stories.
I hope this makes for a better reading experience for you all.
Regards:
Wrath's Child.