So, this story has really gripped me. I would like to say a few things about it though.
First of all, I am not very good and proof reading my own stories for typos and spellcheck wrong words. I apologize for this but even as I read over what I have written, my mind just fills in the correct words for me. I am hoping to find a editor, but with the TS code I'm a bit nervous to start blindly reaching out, as I know it can be a bit niche.
I also want to make a quick shout out to A Strange Geek for his Haven series. I am sure there are probably a few similar themes and a bit of similar word usage to what he has written. This is because I absolutely love that series and have actually read all the novels through at least twice. If you read this A Strange Geek, please recognize it for what it is, another author paying you respect for your wonderful stories and the way you tell them. If you feel I have stepped on your toes, please let me know and I will try to adjust accordingly.
Again, thank you to everyone who has been reading this and I hope to continue for quite a bit with this story. Though, it may not always move at this rapid of a pace. I will have to sleep some time.
Thank you all, and to all, Good Dreams!