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October 28, 2016
Posted at 1:56 pm
 

Chapter 33

I've posted Chapter 33 to the queue. It's the first part of Matt's Saturday and beginning of the fallout from Zoe's decision not to come back. There were a couple of turns of phrase in this one that I was particularly proud of. I'm told "cake-baking Christ" is the most memorable.

Thanks again for all the feedback, positive and negative. It all helps, even if I don't make every suggested correction.