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September 7, 2016
Posted at 10:06 am
 

Strange New World - Chapter 2; feedback wanted

The latest chapter is up and I'm really looking for some feedback.

I know it took me a long time to get it up and posted, but i wanted to make sure I got it just right. It's the perfectionist in me. Plus, I'm working on 2 chapters at a time; and writing another long story in a different genre so I won't get burned out just doing one.

However, I'm really looking for real feedback and criticism to help me in knowing if I'm writing something interesting and grabs your attention to read more. A rating or a quick note would be greatly appreciated. I can't tell you how great it feels to get feedback on what I'm writing. Good or bad, I just want to know what I'm doing right, and what needs improvement.

Thanks.