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I've submitted corrected versions of chapters 1-7 to the moderators. Most of this was for spelling and punctuation errors on my part.

There was one continuity error that needed fixing though. It was pointed out to me that $1million in $100 bills weighs about 22 pounds. Those of you that have read far enough to know how much money we're talking about are now aware of how much weight we're talking about. To correct that, I split one case in the garage into three cases and tried to be as thorough as possible in correcting references to reflect this change.

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