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I just submitted chapter 3 to the moderators.

I want to sincerely thank everyone that's given me feedback on the story including the criticism of the parts that you weren't as thrilled with. Sometimes it's been just a matter of something that will be clarified in a later chapter, but in at least one case, it led to me doing a minor rewrite to address the question of how quickly Lana fell for Matt.

Thank you all for helping me to make the story even better.

 

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