Heritage of the Blood, my first posting here, is a story I have had sitting on my computer, sporadically worked on, for nearly twenty years. I had posted it on another site a year or so ago, with fair results. It is not yet complete, though I just finished chapter 10 last night/night before last (lost track, lol)...
I do appreciate constructive criticism.
And though I did not include the changes he made, as the major ones affected the way some of the characters sounded (the way they spoke), I want to thank sam21 for his editing efforts on my behalf.