I regret it's been 7 weeks since the last update but I have other projects that actually create income. I was stuck on a section of this chapter for awhile then had a wonderful revelation. It's into the second half of the second of three acts. I will get this sucker done.
There have been changes to the opening paragraphs of chapter 1, all changing 'telling' to 'showing', but no changes whatsoever in the story.
Also, I have reasons, I changed Aunt Tess to Aunt Janet (a better Scottish name anyway) and they have now relocated from San Antonio instead of Denver.