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April 8, 2016
Posted at 10:15 pm

The Sunshine Of Your Smile

Sunshine is in the queue to post tomorrow. I assume sometime after 7PM, but I thought today's revised chapter would post earlier. I was fooled.

Sunshine is a very short story - a vignette even - about one of the trials of working with an AI. Like with my other two Swarm stories, it is really a good idea to read other Swarm Cycle stories first.

For those of you wondering about my revision to eliminate the word 'fellows,' I uploaded the change today, along with a few small changes to chapter 16. So many of you suggested changes that were similar, I am dumbfounded that I couldn't come up with it on my own. The following is a synthesizes of different suggestions.

"I want you to know that nothing that has happened during your captivity was your fault. Your job was, and still is, to survive and to help each other survive..."