I've asked to have Carrying the Flag taken down so that I can upload the new and improved version. There are new characters and new plot elements that extend and expand the story in the way I originally intended. Some characters from previous books will put in appearances as well.
I plan to upload the rewritten chapters on a weekly schedule, which will give me time to be working on future chapters. As it stands now the first should go up this weekend.
I crave feedback!