I have posted the fourth chapter of Willow II- Heather.
This is an extreme story set in an extreme world. Let me say again, I consider this like writing in a world created by Steven King or Wes Craven. This is erotic horror. If you do not like strong themes of violence or torture, please do not read. It is not for everyone.
What I hope is that readers judge the work based on whether or not the story works. Does it build suspense? Does it contribute to the plot? Are the characters vivid?
Now, if you do like this chapter...wait till the next one!!