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Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad to see that people are still reading this tale and enjoying it.

To answer Landen's question, the story covers only the first year that Adam and his extended family are on the new planet. I left off with the first of his children being born. Hopefully I will be able to come back to this story in the future and do a sequel.

To address Don's comments, for the time being they did live happily ever after, especially with the help of AI. Of course that doesn't mean that life will be perfect for them. As I say above, I hope to write a sequel that deals with the trials and tribulations of raising so many children with only one father to set an example for them. It could be interesting.

Thanks for reading and contacting me.

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