Ifound 8 or 9 small flaws none close to each other. I left a letter out of a name. I some ended up with would instead of wood. Most likely from moving text around because I am aware of the different uses of both words. left a few words that should been there, a set of quotation marks at the front of dialog. I point this out because yes I seen after the fact. Please email me as I hate to re-post. And being since the story can be understood I won't at this time. Any other flaw I would rather not know as the message of the story is there to see. BUICK GS