Before I put out the next chapter for The Eleventh Percent today, there is a significant change in it from the previous chapters. I decided to stick with just third-person narration. Before, I would switch from third-person to first-person, and vice-versa, to indicate when the protagonist was awake and when he was dreaming. I thought it would be a good idea portray the different dynamics between the two worlds.
I see now that it only confused a good handful of people reading my story. Which, by the way, thank you to those who mentioned the confusion.
That's something to keep in mind before reading the 3rd chapter.
Thank you