Before I put out the next chapter for The Eleventh Percent today, there is a significant change in it from the previous chapters. I decided to stick with just third-person narration. Before, I would switch from third-person to first-person, and vice-versa, to indicate when the protagonist was awake and when he was dreaming. I thought it would be a good idea portray the different dynamics between the two worlds.
I see now that it only confused a good handful of people reading my story. Which, by the way, thank you to those who mentioned the confusion.
That's something to keep in mind before reading the 3rd chapter.