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Several Corrections

June 13, 2015
Posted at 10:19 am

More than fifty readers pointed out two errors that I made in the last chapter.
1. I had conflicting statements whereas in the prolog it referred to two passports, but later said he never knew about the British one. I changed the prolog to remove the conflict because it didn't change the storyline.
2. I called the early BankAmericard, Visa, shame on me, I remember the name change very well. Anyway I fixed it my removing references to BofA and Visa. They aren't important to the story line. I did find out from readers that there were metal cards in use in some major cities prior to that. Since I really was a small town kid I never knew.
I wish I could have finessed these like I did my error on when Yale went coed but there was no saving it.
My self imposed punishment is to reread the entire story to refresh my mind.
Keep those eyes sharp, and thanks.
Oh there were major errors on Ricks insurance situation but I think I have a fix for that.