I like to read. However, there are more things to read than I have time for. I have to choose what to invest my time in. Lapi, whoever he or she is, looks like an enjoyable author. He, she, or it has done some good stuff. However, people who read Lapi's work will immediately notice a desperate need for a proofreader. Unfortunately, Lapi doesn't have email set up on SOL. We can't send feedback. Lapi, do you read this? Your latest work has some issues in the teaser or description. If _that_ shows poor writing, who goes on to read the actual story?