Hiding behind your anonymity, Troll! Tell me - you can do in anonymously if you're that much of a coward - how do you justify that ONE? Was it my grammar? Spelling mistakes? Story structure? Inconsistency? If you didn't like the story, why did you read it? If you read it and just didn't like it, I could understand a TWO - (Hated it) - but 'You call this a story?'
So come on, tell me what's wrong with it, otherwise there's no point to your 'vote'.
