I recently published Her First Time. It hasn't generated much comment so far. I have re-posted it to correct some errors that might have been distracting. I also moved it to First Time category. The title is a bit of a teaser because it isn't exactly a story of first time sex but a more complex story. I think is is quite hotl and the sex builds quite nicely I think. I hope more readers will try it and that they will send me their comments telling what they liked and didn't like.
So far, disappointed in the response.