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TFC sent to the wolves, take 2

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It's no big deal when your proofreaders notice some mis-spelled words, or a place you screwed up the grammar or punctuation. However, when they point out some plot holes you have to stop and think about it.
Okay, that's long enough. I've fixed everything they said and we'll try again.

 

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