I was notified that I had made a grievous error in my story that was too embarrassing to leave alone. I fixed them and reposted a coupled of chapters. It is better now.
On a side note, are there any women who read these stories? When I wrote my story, I gave names to three babies and I have not heard from a single person about baby names. I was expecting at least one person to say something about the baby names I chose. Seemed strange enough that I thought I would ask the question.
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