As a new author some feedback would be very much appreciated.
I have the next book SIG Alpha and its plot completed and have started writing so book 2 shouldn't be too long. I posted the as a whole story to give you guys a reasonable look at what I am creating.
I have attempted to keep as true to at least the spirit of the science and technology involved as possible. This is even to the extent that there has been a patent approved for the nuclear battery used by Ohai albeit my one by been much improved by Ohai(writers imagineering and all that)