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The Enemy Within, redux

May 20, 2014
Posted at 8:33 pm
Updated: May 20, 2014 - 9:09 pm

I have always liked the plot for The Enemy Within. Unfortunately, the story itself never really came together the way I wanted. I recently revisited the story and tweaked the first and last chapters, and moved the end of the first chapter to the last chapter. I also wrote a completely new middle chapter. One of the other Swarm authors commented that the story "is beginning to look like one long story instead of a medley of unrelated stories mashed together." I hope you will think so also. There is also a final chapter of Growing Up being edited that ties the stories together. Aftermath is still being worked on as is another new story. Hopefully they will be ready to be posted soon.