Thanks for reading Ginny. I'll post Ch 24 soon and then we start Part II. Score keeps going down, download keeps going up yet after you factor in the 5% high and low taken off there is not much other 8-10 votes from you readers. Should have marked it a 'stoke' story Ehh.
I'll take a break after ch 24 and see what I'm doing wrong with this story and try to make Part II more interesting for you, the reader or turn voting off on it.