Chapter Fourteen is submitted for posting and should be up shortly.
I was kinda meh on this chapter at first to be honest, and saw it as sort of a 'do this to get to that' sort of part of the story. But I honestly think, after it's all said and done, this is one of my favorite chapters so far.
There's something really awesome about having one thing planned for your characters, one set of behaviors or actions or attitudes, and then your characters go, 'Um no, that's not what I'm going to do, that's not me, THIS is me!'
I think that sort of development that gets away from me and isn't entirely under my control is pretty fascinating, and is very enjoyable to go forward with.
Enjoy everyone, and please, tell me what you all think! Feed the starving writer!