I sent out chapter 18 to my last two proofers Sunday evening. One proofer is on a field trip with students and only has his smart phone until he returns to civilization next Monday and has access to a keyboard, so the next chapter will be posted maybe at the end of next week.
I finished chapter 22; I had a few rough spots as far as the flow from the muse, but all is well again and I like how that chapter turned out.
Keep reading and voting, and thanks to all for the feedback.
Kid Wigger