I am a new writer, and Chocolateen is the first story that I have written and posted. I have several additional stories in the hopper. One of those is in editing, thanks Jim S., and I am pre-editing a second story.
If you enjoyed Part 1 of Chocolateen, please be very patient. Part 2 is just a concept at the moment. I will not write and post that story until after the story that I am pre-editing is posted.
As always, constructive criticism is welcomed.